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“It Came At A Price”

Sarah gives John a smile and turns around. John gets out of the car and looks at her as she walks back to the car. Holding a simple, yet elegant flower, he walks up quietly to the tree.

John: I have to be honest with you. I loved you too. I know, I didn’t always say it, but I did.

He places the flower in front of others.

John: You were the best friend I ever had. You didn’t get mad at me when you found out about Sarah.

Tears start to swell as he holds back the pain.

John: That’s all I remember. Your last words.

He struggles to get the words out.

John: She made me feel again, you know. Her courage through the whole court ordeal made me realize I can’t run away anymore. I’ll always remember you. And you’ll always have a place in my heart.

John gets on his knees, staring at the marks on the tree.

John: It’s a little too late. I know.

He kisses the plague and walks away. The plaque reads, “HERE DIED MARIE FRAMIER. MAY GOD TAKE HER INTO HIS GRACEFUL ARMS AND HAVE PEACE ON HER SOUL.”


Written about 4 years ago It Came At A Price is a story about a young guy who murders his parents. I was reading through my old screenplays and I began to remember who John and Sarah were and who they represented.

It was kind of scary to read this because I realized how creative I was back then and where I am now. I hope to revise this again some day, and maybe even expand it. The ending is a little corny…but hey, I was young.

Now, on my way to writing an A paper!

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